Reflection 2.2

After reading over my first draft and getting feedback I decided to take a somewhat different approach to my paper. I completely took out a couple paragraphs and added new ones. I took out these paragraphs because they were about my own personal views and I could not fully support their claims. Even though I think they did a good job getting my point across, I just could not get proper evidence. Instead I talked about a scholarly article that was very easy to back up. Although, the article was extremely difficult to find; in the end it was very useful.